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Karen Dellis's avatar

I can contribute short, non-expert, off-the-cuff, reader-point-of-view comments on any chapters you post...

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Shane's avatar

That is exactly what I was hoping for!

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William Sky's avatar

Count me in!

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Cimbri's avatar

I would enjoy this, but would hate to have the final version spoiled for me. Probably much like being on the set for filming of a movie you would have wanted to see. But if you don’t get enough other people I will be happy to help.

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Shane's avatar

I fully understand this perspective. There are three more novellas planned, so maybe you could try following along for one of them to see if your fears are well founded. I will only be dropping a chapter or two a week and my drafts tend to turn out in close to their finished form (just some line editing as a follow up before official release). Based on past experience there might be one chapter that gets scrapped and rewritten along the way.

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Cimbri's avatar

In that case I can probably help out for sure :)

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Bark76's avatar

Obviously you're screening for proofreaders - 'An immodest proposal' :)

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Shane's avatar

I can handle line editing. Mostly looking for people brave enough to tell me when they think the latest chapter needs rewriting.

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