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William Sky's avatar

I really like the letter format. It shows character and urgency in the writer through the actual written words rather than the narrative descriptors we're used to e.g. "she pleaded". That's quite a challenge to write, but when you pull it off, it creates this strong subtext. I think for longer works the format could get tiresome, but in this flash fiction it works a treat. Loved it!

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Karen Dellis's avatar

I felt a sense of unease and maybe even horror or dread as I read it?

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